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Jilted.

Fearful
Frantic
Frustrated

Listless
Lonesome
Lugubrious

Desperate
Dismal
Disillusioned

Enervated
Estranged
Empty

Ignored
Insulted
Irate

Concerned
Confused
Crushed

Abandoned
Abysmal
Alone





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  • paullallady silver member
    March 5, 2007

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    very interesting how each stanza held such descriptive words beginning with the same letter.
    A very sad piece though. great job.


  • lucy sky-diamond
    February 20, 2007

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    great ending, loving the use of alliteration. alot of good vocab used. thank you very much for your entry, and good luck