Sitting
Alone
Crying
Hysterically
Frustrated
Exasperated
Abused
Forgotten
Mental
Anguish
Love
Scorned
Clothing
Torn
Stolen
Innocence
Trust
Non-Existent
Hate
Evident
Trying
To
Make
Sense
Of
Recent
Events
Author notes
Very clever, deep, and difficult form. Good luck judging your contest.
Please, comment honestly! And since this is for an anonymous contest, please refrain from using my name! :) Thank you!
A contest entry
- Something out of the ordinary... by lucy sky-diamond.
600 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like it
Is the phallus shape intended, accidental, or my twisted imagination?
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I haven't been on in a while... finally checking on comments that have been written on my poetry.
The phallus was unintentional but I'm glad you like it!
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Wow
I love this poem. It is filled with such emotion and truth. I like the way you formed it and well all-together it's a great poem. Keep up the Wonderful Writes. ~Shirree A.k.A ~Ocean Dreams
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Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I will return the favor as soon as I can.
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this speaks of such pain and sadness. The form used, which I know is required, really was used well by you to show this pain. the short staccato words, were really perfect.
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