now I pray
take me home
leave me whole
make me gone
kill my fears
give them wings
make me want
what life brings
kiss my tears
make them feint
give them no
heat or pain
take my hand
make me whole
be my guide
be my soul
Chorus Starts:
I've never known why I feel like this
and now I know it's all you
it's every time that we kiss
every time you show it's true
It's every sunset we've seen
every single midnight wish
and it's everything you bring
it's every time we kiss
:Chorus Ends
take your words
make them sweet
give me joy
free my soul
give my pain
to the world
if it falls
let it go
hold my heart
keep it warm
feel its beat
become yours
hold me tight
don't let go
if you care
let it show
Chorus 1x
kiss my cheek
make it warm
guide me from
any harm
just because
we aren't near
doesn't mean
we don't care
I love you
but I can't
tell you yet
it's too soon
now I pray
take me home
leave me whole
make me gone
Chorus 1x
It's every sunset we've seen
every single midnight wish
and it's everything you bring
it's every time we kiss
Author notes
My name is Kat Turney!!
My allpoetry name is Greenkat92!
And I'm 15!
I hope that at least we can be friends- you seem pretty cool! oh- sorry- i don't have a picture---
much luv~
kitty
A contest entry
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Critique your heart out!!!! I beg of you to!!!!
Comments
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Beautiful.....I'm glad I read this and laid eyes on it...
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Good work. I've added you as a favoirte. Good luck in my contest
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thankyou!! i hope you find the person you are looking for in this contest!
much luv~
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It's looking like it might be you, you've interested me the most yet
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thankyou! but i don't want to taint your judging, so i'll have to stop messaging you for now!
much luv~
kitty
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It's almost like that song everytime we touch....thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest
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a wonderful love-song ...
graceful words creating a nice flow and rhythm in this piece ... very heartfelt and sweet ...
maa
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Thankyou Thankyou!!
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This is good!
I really like this! and its a song? wow, a lot of people entered songs in this contest, but i really like this! good luck! -
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Thankyou Thankyou!!
Good luck in judging this contest!!!
much luv~
shadowed
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I really liked this a lot it's really sweet and I like how you put it in the form of a song you have done well with this great work and keep it up
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Wow!
This is very nice I like it alot
Inuyasha
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thankyou!
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after reading it, i just wish i could listen to it as a song well done!
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Thankyou thankyou thankyou!!!!
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Wow! this is an awesome write!! Especially when it's lyrics that are so sweet and meaningful.
Ty
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YAAAAY!!!- I
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haha You're very welcome
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Aww...I really liked this a lot. It's really sweet, and I like how you put it in the form of a song. I'm a hopeless romantic at heart, so anything dealing with love like this always gets me excited. ^^ And thank you for the comment on my poem!
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Thanx!!
I am sooooooo happy you liked it!!!
much luv~
shadowed
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Nice!
Great job. I love it, & it actually made my heart flutter. I've always been a sucker for a love song, but haven't read any like this in a while. Amazing!
Thank you for entering.
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Thankyou very much dear!!
I'm very glad you enjoyed it, I wrote it(typed it) the second I saw option three!!
much luv~
shadowed
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