Adversity brings me
Topsy turvey
Round the bend
Adversity brings me
Joy in the simple
Fantasy mends
Adversity brings me
To enlightenments door
Adversity sinks me
Humble heap on the floor
A contest entry
- Help me to help my mum by Broken - Doll.
800 points, ended February 26, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I am not good at adversity. I'm far to laid back, I hate anything that forces me outside my little box. So I certainly can understand why what this poem speaks about.
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This is a very interesting piece indeed. I love the form you have used in this one, it flows very well and has a nice rhythm to it. Thankyou for entering my contest.
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Very nice...I really enjoy this style. It flows so smoothly (not choppy like many of my own posts). Thanks for the great read and keep up the good work. Kia kaha,Rox
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Ms Sarah, I like and the message is/was wise. --- thank you
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Wow, that's amazing.
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