Life is a mystery
with unfulfilled longings
We question our purpose
Never knowing if we are on
the right journey
Loving old lovers that leave
without explanation
enjoying erotic pleasures
with new lovers
that fulfill wild fantasies
Reality being too much to bear
Turning situations into
what we want them to be
not what they truly are
becoming so blinded with desire
that our wants and needs
become our only source of survival
Losing focus on the transition
that we are experiencing
We fail to see our growing process
by staying grounded in chaos
Open fears door and capture
The spirit that makes you “YOU”
In a list
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"our wants and needs become our only source of survival" it makes me sad to think that this is truly why i am living now to think that this is actually true and that some only stay alive by doing this you are an amazing writer
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This is good as far as it goes, but you are two rungs too low on the ladder to reach what you seek. Step up! Then step up again! Three bunnies for this piece because it makes me hot.
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"our wants and needs
become our only source of survival" this is so deep and true, gf. Perhaps it was keeps us strong and , of course, searching. The bar was raised high. -
Insightful piece of poetry nicely stated. Interesting and creative, conveys a message that is pleasant to read. Thanks for sharing.
~Snappy~
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HI, this was deeply felt by me these words... we all tend to get so wrapped up in our wants and needs , we end up leaving destructive wakes sometimes, "hell bent for pleasure, running toward an open abyss" very poignant and spot on in truth and reality here. well done dear
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Intensely "soulful" this write...goes right along with my life motto...about its all about the journey not the destination...and oh those bumps along the way, make us and shape us into the beautiful creatures that our spirits are...so let them soar! Excellent pic with your words, once again! Outstanding! Bravo!
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