Sorrow
flawless
grieve
forever,
stabbing
anguish
waning
fervour
Memoirs
tainted
dreaming
haunted
fingers
grasping
senses
taunted
Fading
living
pain
infernal
heartbeat
broken
trapped
eternal
Please tell me what you think
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Wow,That was intense I'm speechless
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GREAT...
I don't know if I can step up to what you're lookin for in your contest...but this is INCREDIBLE...
Your talent astounds me for your age...
Great write ...
Heidi -
very different..and wow each word has a thousand meanings...this could leave a reader thinking for hours on end well done and goo luck in my contest
laura xx -
Very Good
Very good job on this write, you accomplished the task of not only writing a poem, one word per line, but you too, told a story and let us feel emotions. Excellent!
Good luck in this contest and This was certainly my pleasure to read
~Tia
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i would give you 3 applauses but it costs points which I am saving for a contest so...
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This is a really good poem. I love the format and thank you for introducing it to me in your contest.
Memoirs
tainted
dreaming
haunted
fingers
grasping
senses
taunted
My favourite lines of course. I love the images iside my head and the background really suits the nature of the poem.
Well done and best of luck!
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Super !
I think this is a very good poem. It hit me the minute I started reading it. Keep up the great work.
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Quite a unique format thanks for entering much love,Raneika
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Hey, this is cool, I like the rhyme!
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Great idea and great poem. I will definitly have to try one of these now.
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this is awesome
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Wow
Well done I really have to say. Incredible write really. You did a wonderful job through and through.
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Well I must admit that this is a first for me. I just read about your contest and thought "can't be done" but ho how wrong I am. You have captured a theme,imagery and rythme but don't ask me how, its incredible. Well done. Val
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WOW!!!
That's all I can say. Everyword captivated me until the end. Short and sweet and right to the point....Great job!!!
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nice, I was wanting to do one like this, and now that you have a contest for it, i guess no more putting it off, I will attempt to enter, anyways great job on your poem as well, deep and emotional at the same time, flowed well too. Great choice in vocabulary!!! - Jacen an IndividualEleven.
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an interesting way of combining words my friend, good luck in the contest
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