He had but one love,
Over which he had no control,
That love was blood,
It kept him whole.
He searched for it
All through the night.
That drink of life,
That special pint.
Her wholesome scent,
He found her there,
Gazing at the moon,
In silent stare.
She was the virgin,
Who's blood he wanted,
What happened next,
Would leave him haunted.
He sucked her blood,
And lit her fire,
Her passion grew
To pure desire.
She licked the blood
Right from his chin,
And looked at him
With an evil grin.
Her blood ran down
Below her waist,
He tried to savor
Every taste.
He came to places
Unexplored,
Spots which had been
Totally ignored.
Her sweet scent then did
Lure him in,
That's when his demise
Did truly begin.
She mesmerized him
With sex and charm,
Her only intent,
To do him harm.
She slit his throat,
Which caused a red flood,
Seems her only interest
Was his blood.
She had but one love
Over which she had no control,
That love was blood,
It made her whole.
A contest entry
- Vampires and Blood! by okadadokie.
500 points, ended February 23, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is really good congratulations on the silver hope you do well with it in this contest
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ok...so
first of all this is an amazing poem good rhyme and great flow .but sadly I have to d.q because I breacks the firt rule
sorry.but if you have any poems with no erotica I'd love you to enter them.I really like your writting stile
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Thank you for entering my humble little contest I am enjoying this one alot - I hope you had as much fun entering as I am reading all the different entries! I am really getting some good stuff this time around
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great write a true peace of art blood is one of my fav subject you did a supendus job thank you for joining and to the best of luck to you
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Just wanted to say congratulations on your silver with this deserving piece
Bravo
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Fantastic write! Really drew you in and the twist at the end was an evil surprise lol I love it! Keep up the good work!
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Oh my word!
This poem enchanted me
I love the rhyming scheme and the words you used.
It's hard to make a rhyming poem that makes sence...yours did very, very well!!
Thank you so much for entering and good luck!
Blessed Be
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Wow, awesome, nice twist. I really like this, along with all your other poems. Good luck in the contest, keep writing and take care x
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I love your dark poems that are great. You have a real gift for the dark side. Never stop! Great write!!
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...........oh my you are just too good! i am really a fan! and i'm still waiting for you to come out of your shell with some free verse! lol..but this is very well written my friend! good luck in the contest!
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I really like this!!
Dare I say.... you amaze me!
Angie <3 -
Brilliant
Great poem with a great twist.
Bravo
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Hmmm
I love your ability to enter contest and blow me away with the results. Wonderful job..You should try and enter one of mine
This was truly a mesmerizing write. Perfect in form as usual lol. Great job and truly keep the pen flowing...
Always
Emily
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There is only one word that can describe this.......................and if I could think of it I would write it. This poem had me memorized. Simply enchanting, how words can be put together so perfectly. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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