I wait for you to come to me
in the darkness of the night
I hear your footsteps
you finally enter my room
I hear the rustling as you slowly
remove your clothes
I hold my breath
pretending I am asleep
you crawl into my bed
The smell of you enticing me
desiring your forbidden lust
You entwine your body around mine
I feel your hot breath softly
whispering what you want
knowing I would never refuse
Body to body
Lover to lover
Lingually teasing me
as my passionate moans
become more rapid
Filling me with all of you
revealing the secrets inside
Bathing me in the essence of you
Then quickly you slip back into the
darkness and once again
satisfying my
addiction
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Very good! Thanks for your great entry and good luck!
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awesome
this is a really good poem u should enter it into a contest it was full of lust and excitment
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Great
Wow this is really good you could write a love story easily you are brillant writter one of the best ive read in a long time about time so more good writters come along on this website
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Lustful,sensual, erotic and so much more this piece, very visualistic in the minds eye here, hmmm, (cold shower)
liked this piece very nice and finley written
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intoxicating
love this one!
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WOW, very good erotica you penned here its tasteful keeps the reader in suspense. Well written poem you penned here well done dear poet
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oh boy...come full moon, come sp[ring...come whatever is pouring this from yoou...whoo hoo....whewwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Awwww Sistah, this is truly exquisite....sensual and breath-taking...Lingually teasing me
as my passionate moans
become more rapid
Filling me with all of you
revealing the secrets inside
Bathing me in the essence of you
Then quickly you slip back into the
darkness and once again
satisfying my
addiction
OMG.....that is truly breath-taking....where did this arise out of ya???Lovin it...~~~Your kindred sistah~~~
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