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If I could only do this here?

In the trappings of everyday life, we're faced with things
Forgetting how much pain and misery seems to follow us

Its also painful watching others suffer, when something can be done

Can't say that I'm a role model, for I'm also tested daily
Over and over again the rigors of life wears us down
Understand though, I can be of assistance and willing to help
Letting someone know, that someone here cares a lot
Don't ever let life get you down, for you will see...there's hope

On any given day, too...we are all becoming a statistic
Never knowing again, the feeling of joy, comfort and serenity
Look ahead, if you are brave, and there's someone waiting
Yes, the one who wants to make sure that its all right for you

Daily then, are the things that remain untouched and forgotten
Oh how that laments me, for its time to change this world

That would be beautiful, for it sure will add up to something
Having to dig a hole to hide, doesn't have to happen anymore
Its time then, for a knight to finally defeat that adversary
Something that's well overdue, its time now to make a stand

Having a quest now, its time for others to finally take notice
Especially when if they want, fate and destiny will be kind
Right now, there's a calling...for each and everyone here
Especially if I could only do this here, the world is ours to conquer

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  • Lullabyhaven
    February 20, 2007
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    A very intense

    Write. I felt a lot reading this. Thanks for the experience.


  • --Beautiful--
    February 20, 2007

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    wonderful...this is much less like a poem but more of a well writen speach. i love it and it fits well in my life! it is a beautiful write thank you for entering and good look


  • Whoochi gold member
    February 20, 2007

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    Chivalry, compassion and care goes into this testimony of conquering this harsh cold worls we sometimes get sucked into and feeling all alone...Thanks for extending your hand...good job with this write....full of hope, encouragement and inspiration...