Alas, my heart does beat, he smiles
Just as the baby spring emerged
To last my soul a little while
Thus melancholy, hence, is purged
Oh such a smile, as bright as sun
To brighten moods abased and cold
One maybe meant for anyone
Yet meant for me, to say this bold
Behold, within this winter’s day
The feat accomplished, silent words
And dare, should I, to simply say
A new love, hence the smile, emerged
And yet my heart beats still, he passed
And in this essence, he departs
Yet spawns a love to always last
This winter’s day, he stole my heart
A contest entry
- Do You Love Me Now? by AkaBaki.
450 points, ended February 24, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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this was kind of hard to read but its a beautiful poem and i love the bg. thanks for entering!
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nice, i like it. Best of luck in my contest
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This is a nice poem, and I liked it. I don't see any fault with this at all. It is a really good poem. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry and good luck in my contest.
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this is sad...thanks for entering though. Sorry my comment isn't as deep as your poem...but I have a lot of poems to judge...well done though...well done.
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Oh that's fine. I understand. I saw that when I entered.
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please put death is near as to shown you have had read the rule as i know you must have
I love this poem it was dearly and amazingly well penned i love the connections made i loved the last stanza the most.
Good luck in my contest
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WOW! this is very beautiful as well as deep, you take your readers into a journey of love and it's qutie lovely. Thank you for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest.
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Aw thanks...I just wish I still felt the same way for the person I wrote it for.
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Omg
I loved this poem. I shouldn't say this but it is definately a winner. shhh... lol. great work. i loved the whole poem. It leaves me breathless. i can feel the emotion. great job. keep up the good work. i loved it.
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lol that's fine, I've done that before on SW (or I think I have) thank you for liking it!!! I appreciate it much!
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