The grace of a unicorn
The power of a dragon
Riding through the meadows
On a unicorns back the sun on your face
The shadow on the ground
You and the unicorn as one
Riding through the night sky
On the shoulders of a dragon, The moon behind
The dark figure bringing aw to all that see
You and the dragon as one
The beauty of the unicorn
No other creature can compare
A unicorns horn the thing of myths
The might of a Dragon
No other force as powerful
The dragons fire, the thing of fairytales
The princess as one with the unicorn
The prince as one with the dragon
Its the beauty and the power
That brings the two forces together
Its beauty and power that rule the land
The Dragon of the skys,
The unicorn of the fields
The king an queen of the world
Author notes
Dragon and Unicorn
A contest entry
- Many Options! Fairy Tale Style! (For kids 11 and under ONLY!) by EmotionlessStranger.
375 points, ended March 28, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPTIONS FOR EVERYONE!!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
425 points, ended March 8, 2007, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites allowed ! guess whats the contest about ? by sweethelper.
300 points, ended February 24, 2007, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THE FAIRY TALE CONTEST by SilentWolf2012.
600 points, ended May 23, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice!
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Very nice...
... I really appreciate you entering the contest and I must tell you.. you've written a very nice poem. However, your poem is an honorable mention poem and that puts you out of the running for a trophy. I thank you for trying but I am going to have to disqualify you. Sorry. Kassie -
great poem!!!!! Its is really good I hope you win in the contest!!! good luck!!!!!
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Wicked
I realy like this poem because it was just pretty and thats the way I like thing I hope you get a place, well done and a very big GOOD LUCK
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Oops. i didn't mean for that smilie face. Sorry
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Pretty
Thats pretty much all i can say, for that is the only word to describe it. Very, very pretty and imaginitive.
Best of luck in the contest!
xo
sam
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This is very lovely and creative, I like the idea of the prince and princess then the king & Queen.
Just a couple of typos like 'skys' should be 'skies' and 'an' should be 'and' in the last line. And I would change the 'as' to 'is' in:
"The princess as one with the unicorn
The prince as one with the dragon"
Thank you so much for sharing, and entering in my contest. Good luck and keep on writing,
Nooni
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