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Dragons and Unicorns and Fun...Oh My!

*D*id you ever see a dragon fly by
*R*ising and roaring up in the sky?
*A*rousing different feelings of fear and amazement
*G*iving fair maidens a feel of  abandon and ambient
*O*nce in a life time is a chance she can’t pass
*N*ever thinking twice or that she should ask
*S*omeone for permission or the dragons destiny

*A*roused by the grandeur and what fun it would be
*N*everland was the place she had on her mind
*D*ivining to meet creatures of varying kinds.

*U*nder the tree of silver limbed branches
*N*o utterance of wonderment could she make at the scratches
*I*ncurred as she stared at the unicorn in the trees on the hill
*C*ould it really be true? Could this trip be for real?
*O*ver the skyline she saw a rainbow of all colors
*R*eveling in a spirit of the ancient gladiators
*N*eeding to stay in the wondrous place
*S*he leapt from the dragon and met the unicorn face to face.

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    February 20, 2007

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    That was really lovely, enjoyable and a magical trip. I was flying and I could see the unicorn, I am only the reader-maiden
    I really enjoyed reading this, it is very nicely written. A lovely Acrostic poem, with a very nice flow and rhyme.

    Please put your option number in your author's comments. And I think it should be "stared" in "*I*ncurred as she stare at the unicorn"

    Keep on writing, and thank you so much for entering this in my contest. Good luck!
    Nooni


    • ShaShay
      February 21, 2007
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      Thank you

      I appreciate you telling me about my mistakes. Thank you very much.