I want to get away
I feel trapped
my blood is screaming
"Let me out!"
my heart is tired
of fighting,
and
my head is tired
of worrying
is there no one out there
who would help up a fallen angel?
Author notes
please....just don't ask.
Please tell me what....er...you think. uh.....
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This is very good. I think I know how u feel, but this is great!
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you say you're not that good at poetry, but this is actually pretty good! you know what's wierd? i came 2 check you out because your username is VERY close 2 a story i made up. anyways, great write. i like the way the words are presented, it sounds good
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good work
i understand your point of view and as a cutter this really speaks to me. sometimes i feel the same way and it seems like letting go is the only thing to do then i look at all the things around me like my family and friends and all those who love me and i realize that living is much better. and by the way i would be here to help you if you'd let me
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deeply saddening
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I liiiike
I LIKE THIS POEM! lol
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Hm, Rella. Very emotional.
I love the line "my blood is screaming, let me out!"
I love that.
Good poem, sweetie.
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you are never fallen dear young one...love you
always rebecca
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I can relate to how you are feeling in this poem if indeed this is true. If not, you did a great job. Keep up the great writes. Great job.
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i really like the idea of bloody screaming "let me out!" it's a crazy thought! but a unique, awesome line. i like the whole poem, keep it up friend. -wave
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