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[ Akasha, Akasha! The Light of Akasha, the Spirit, the Mother, the Womb Undiscovered! ]

Akasha, Akasha! The Light of Akasha, the Spirit, the Mother, the Womb Undiscovered!
How Vast She is, Vault of the Heavens, Circumference, Circumference!
His Name be Hidden, that secret Unbidden, the Will and the Force that upon her Womb walks!
How Secret is He, Sacred Point, Center, Center!
Expressive, Explosions; from Light comes this Flaming and Brilliant creation!
How Rapid is He, Motion and Energy, with Burning Intensity thus Manifests!
Breathing, Invisable; this Breath so Untouchable, this Ghost so Inutterable!
How Empty is He, Uncontained and Free, with Screaming and Breezing thus Manifests!
Flowing and Churning; Life's cradle returning Life then to Death with a steady Embrace!
How Engulfing She is, filling up the Oceans, with Waves and Rivers Manifests!
Steady and Gravid; these Walls forever Standing, this Soil both Womb and Tomb!
How Unforgiving She is, where Green things begin, with Crystals and Dirt Manifests!

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    February 20, 2007

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    This is a bit weird and slightly confusing. The poem is very quick. It has a nice flow, but your punctuation is weird... I usually don't mind, but the capitalization was too much...
    please do not reply to this coz that way I will know who you are and I should not.
    But anyways, I liked it even though it confused me

    Thank you for entering it my contest, good luck and keep on writing,
    Nooni