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You're Cool

Elegantly driven
Gently pursued
Heart's on the upcline
Emotions are too

Fair weathering, never
Over the top, yes
I've noticed you've given me
Only your best

Hand me downs, counterfeit
Fresh as the dew
I've got an inkling
That I like you

Intensification
Devotion declared
I like your style
And, I like your flair

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Yesterday was a treat.

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  • afireinthisheart
    February 20, 2007

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    this is beautiful and touches the reader who reads this beautiful poem...everyday is different, its when you get to enjoy them, that its a treat! Beautifully written Patricia...smile...hugs and love...David

    • Lullabyhaven
      February 20, 2007
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      Style

      You always say it with style...thanks, David, I appreciate


  • PerVirtuous
    February 20, 2007
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    I like it! Fantastic.

    • Lullabyhaven
      February 20, 2007

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      1,2,3?

      Pinch me, 3 great reviews in a row, I'm enraptured.
      Thanks, Jus...you're wonderful, that you are.