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A Fractional Ether

There is being part of a whole, a fractional persona–
not one–not all,
but satisfied in the ether of a dividend.
And then there is being the summation of a self,
of a singular spirit; the truest immortal of the mind.

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  • Wolfdog silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    Excellent

    I really like this one, my friend. It reminds me of the poem I wrote called: 'Fractals'. Haven't heard from you for a while, hope all is going well.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    March 5, 2007

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    A Very Thoughtful Write!

    The poet here shows his gifting with words, and makes us think which best typifies a person by using clever words..one must think to read this write...It shows the talent of the poet...Its like choosing by choice who we are...He helps us as he makes the last definition of the equation, and it best suits me.We are a singular, or one spirit, the truest immortal of the mind...(and I would add..we live in a body as well and have a soul..we are a tripartate being) to make all complete...My own opinion of course..This poet keeps you thinking....Very gifted Write!