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~~Always Remember~~

To my treasure far away
Always remember the words
I would say and write
Just see them with more than just your sight
The sentences themselves are just a start
I want the meaning behind them to show
With words, which is the only way I know
I cherish knowing for you, your love
Was always faithful and true
But I must accept, never again
Will I know these things
To my eyes, surely tears that brings
There is no one else, in this whole world
Who in my heart, who could ever take your place
For you see my love, you still feel all the space
You are far from me, from where I am today
But I will always see my reflection
My heart of love in you
Tomorrow I’ll find I am still in love with you
When the distance between us
Becomes to be all these miles
The longing to see you, my sweet love
Turns into the worse of trials
From my eye is formed a tear to crystallize
I hope within your heart
You suddenly come to realize
I need your loving arms to hold me tight
I love onto your shoulder, my head to lay
When evening comes, at the end of the day
This my love, I wanted you to know
Or perhaps you won’t know it till I’m gone
And then you’ll reminisce…
Then… you’ll miss my love
Then… you’ll miss my writes
But always remember the simple
Three letter words





Author notes

#43

To you my love,

A simple message,in simple words...
For there are no words more beautiful or more simple than "I LOVE YOU"
I hope there is a special place in times, reserved for you and me.

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  • Chief Callahan
    February 21, 2007
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    A very touching poem here Grace....who can forget words like this and what man in their right mind would want to. I did feel your passion as your words spoke of your inner desires and longing for that togetherness and it is a feeling that can't be ignored. Good luck in your contest Grace


  • honey bear
    February 20, 2007
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    this feels like a very deeply personal write , it is full of deep love and yearning, if it is from life then i wish yo uall the love and happiness my friend , it is a lovely dedication for a loved one good luck in the contest


  • wings of an angel
    February 20, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem you penned here sis, so full of love for your loved one good luck in my contest