musty cobwebs whispering
'tween my auricles
robbed of sought after articles
left with lead debt & a brass knob
throbbing deaf
nodding to the sobbing
a nod to god
had I a rod of hindsight
I'd write
& untie the knot
© Menstruosity Productions
A contest entry
- Ten Lines or less of Wonderment! by mysticstorm.
425 points, ended February 20, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
It's been around what, a year since I wrote anything besides homework? I need to find where I left off...
Comments
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You are going strong aren't you. Great one.
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Very nice and deep. Wonderful metaphor and strength in understanding./ If we only had hinesight...Nicely done!
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Enigmatic
i dont think i get the gest of this piece, but it reminds me of the critical hangover (alcohol poisoning) i had just yesterday.
-cheers
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It sure feels like that right now : x
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