My Lover
My
Lover
Lays in bed
Tied to the posts
Anxiously she waits
Her body quivering
Kisses placed upon her skin
Desire grows from deep within
Bodies quake as orgasms beckon
Souls unite in pure climatic release
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OOOOH nice babes, I love this, Yes this speaks to me of hours of fun! Well then umm we all know what I am into, even though I am sitting on lovly whelts right now..OOps ubmissive moment relaps
Yes you have discribed a very erotic moment that has to be experienced to be truly appreciated! Nicly done my friend 
~Dins~
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thanks Dins, i do occasionally write good clean erotica
glad you enjoyed it
ang
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yummy
I remember sex... i think it was something i enjoyed once.... sigh! Damn this sounds so yummy i'm almost tempted to break my vow of celibacy LOL
Well done Ang! you surpass yourself with every poem!
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Wonderful and hot
I like this a lot my sister. Short yet very very imagery indeed. I love the anticipation in this piece, of whats to come. The crescendo builds - eventually - to a climax of passion. Wonderful writing again Ang. Very well done for this short, but powerful piece of writing.
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thank you soooooo much for your wonderful words my Brother, your comments are always looked forward to.
ang
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Ooooooooo
I like this! Hehehehe
there she again,
the queen of erotica, lol...this is mild for you hun,
but it kinda works better that way, keeps us hangin! Great work
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thanks Lexie, queen of erotica? well thank you dearly for that title my friend it is greatly appreciated.
ang
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^_^
Amazing. Felt like I was there. <3 -
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hey my sexy girlfriend, long time no see *kisses you long and wet*
thanks for reading and commenting my hunny
ILY
ang
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interesting form and structure
I think this is fine but i have a feeling there is a lot more to come so i will look forward to other works
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thank you for reading and commenting Peteskid, it is greatly appreciated. the form is called etheree and i have only done 1 other poem like this
ang
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Very well done..I am just recently starting to post some of my erotic pieces. I enjoyed this alot.
Soulful Woman
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thank you Soulful Woman, your comments is greatly appreciated.
ang
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Hhehehe
I really like this one, you are back to the old Ang who blows us all away with her erotic writing. I can but dream of this.... and much more
Well done ML
me
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thanks Lisa although this is mild in comparisson to some stuff i have written.
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it is but the images it conjures in the mind makes it really hot!!!!
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