there was a brick wall
demanding her silence
soaking up her whispers
letting them seep out
between loose pores
full of women’s tamping
to keep night out
and the crying in.
In a list
A contest entry
- What do you think about this? (picture inspired)#2 by Quiet places.
550 points, ended February 20, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you!
For your wonderful poem and being my Bronze winner! An exceptionally great write! Thanks again, Don -
Thank you for your entry
Imagery and the display of the lack of emotion makes this a true message and wonderful poem. All the thought as to being in constant danger with an attitude that may save your life. Well thought out poem. Good luck, Don -
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I was so glad to get back inhere and fix an error...lol..I was chomping at the bit...errr...brick
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"to keep night out
and the crying in."
Sighhh...Mournful & lovely, my Friend...Good luck in the contest, Sweetie...
Wanda
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thank you gf. Trying to leave out the emotion is difficult for me...I am such a suck.
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