She’s a fuck on first dates, sort of chick
Her dad owns a brewery, out in the sticks
She’s a cum slut, don’t matter miss or hit
So long as you cum on her stomach or tits
She won’t knock you back, in case it’s her last
She had most the town, their all in her past
She’s aged a lot, her tits have both dropped
The sight of her will ensure you’re flopped
In a list
A contest entry
- Bartholomew Mole's Very Silly Contest by Bartholomew Mole.
400 points, ended March 5, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh gosh! That is hilarious! I just love your background! Great write all around!
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this is a very amusing piece. it sounds like a ballad to me. very nice and good luck.
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excellent
I love this slipperssun quite the blunt description of a down town whore. A fuck on first dates sort of chick, that says it all babe. Vulgar and humorous and a very good image you have created with this one. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
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Good stuff, Barty likes this one, pretty hot stuff this friend of yours! Send her over and Barty will find her a job working on street for him.
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two up on both accounts--plus one
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lol wow what a colorful background. This was short but really good and put a smile on my face. The best of luck to you in the contest.
Kari -
lol, this is something, kind of my kind, kind of poem, lol i think you did agreat job on this keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! lol! Enjoyed it though - very descriptive and the fact that her dad owns a brewery must be a REAL advantage!
It was fun to read - thank u!
Bravo!
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light, yet very raunchy..love the way you did that
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