You are such a
liar, faker
Only loving
yourself, a taker
Hater
I was
Just your toy
Only
you are just
mean and lonely
I hate you
As you hate me
We were not
meant to be
I hope you
choke and die
Everything you
are a lie
goodbye
A contest entry
- Take me away by --Beautiful--.
685 points, ended March 19, 2007, 22 entries
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love it and i know how it feels this poem remendes me of one of my ex boyfrinds all he did was lie to me.
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you can feel the emotions in your words. emotional poems are truly the moving ones.
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Whoa. This is a great write, It made me think.
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i liked this one
it really made me think
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very good...i'm not much of a fan for rythming but this is still good. I understand the pain and emotion in this poem. Emotion is what makes a poem good. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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