Our love it seems, like childhood dreams and fairy tales of the past
Is still as real and still we feel this love we know will last,
As memories grow like waters flowing gently to the sea,
Our hearts have known a love that's grown and belongs to you and me~
What seeds we sow can only grow with tender hands and care
With gentle rains upon the grain in our garden we share
As our Rose Tree blossoms, and flowers drink the dew
The gentle breeze flows with ease, like the love of me and you~
As days become collections of the past
Come wintry cold from seasons-bold, our Tree of Love will last
And when my years are ended here and to my grave I will go
I'll take with me fond memories,
Of The Tree That Grew The Rose~
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Written June 20th, 2003
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Ooh..My mom would LOVE this backround...She has an unhealthy obsession with roses...LOL
This was lovely...Keep it up! Thanks for commenting on my poem too!
!~YS4e ~!
Scarlett -
i love this as well as i love all of your other poems. but i think i love this one more than any of which i have read so far. but im just gettin started. wonderful write
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This reminds me of some classic greeting cards I have seen...the picture, the words of love...I can almost smell the scent of lavender and cedar that come from the chest this was taken from with care...bound in a faded green ribbon....god I love this one...huge hugs, Rom
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Beautiful poetry of a lasting Love
and what better way to decribe LOVE to use the Rose as a symbolic symbol
i can see once where this love lived
to know there was such a love growing there ..
with the Roses all in bloom "So heartbreaking but beautiful"
Wow" Susan ..You have been writing some nostalgic pieces lately
Wonderful! reading Susan .."Most lovely" Loves to you hon* and may your Roses always be in bloom Sweety* 
Love to Youuuuu ~Mina
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Absolutely beautiful it brought a smile to my face upon reading it. I also admire your structure and rhyming talent. Truly an extraordinary job. It’s a lovely elegant loving poem.
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Your loving touch is gently applied. Such a warm spirit you have. You write of love so knowingly~ lovely. Joyce
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ohhhhh, this is sooo pretty, it had such a wonderful flow to it and i love the choice of words you used, they fit so nicely with the topic of the poem, its great love! Good job!!
*hugs*
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OK this is DEFINATLY a hallmark greeting card. Very pretty... Val
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Such a flowing and beautiful poem. I love this. Gives me a real feeling of peace to read it. It even has healing qualities, I think. Thanks! Awesome water! Peace & Love. ET
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Wonderfuly presented
Susan this is beautiful a refreshing and lovely piece really liked this one and your backgrounds perfect....You get my IM this week?
You did a wonderful job writing this and it flowed like a fresh breeze in the wind into the soul being presented in muse......
Love,Sherry
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aww, susan this is so sweet, such a nice love poem.:)
very pretty images you compare it to as well:) very nice, lovely poem, and the rhyming is really cool too:)
you gotta catch up on me too:P lol
kayla* -
Such a wonderfully loving heartfelt piece of artistry you have created to share with us all here. Such beautiful words you have used in creating a most vivid picture in one's mind.The background is georgous and so fitting.I have to agree with everyone else on this piece........Great Write!
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Beautiful write Susan.. and the background is yummy.. infact I pinched it >>>LOLOLOLOL
hope you don't mind..
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really escaped into the words of this poem a truly moving experience thank you
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For stupid nemo left no words...
It were so perfect choosen words...
It flows so perfec rhyme...
It hits the echo every line...
Thanx for shareing...
sajonara
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You are the tree and you ARE the rose,
The fount from which all passion flows,
Your gentle gift of poetry,
Brings comfort to the heart of me.../fhug /fLOL goin crazy with the flowers AGAIN.
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Very beautiful, Sis! Love the background, too..just gorgeous!
Luv Ya,
< 3 Maureen
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awww...this is such a gorgeous metaphore!! theres a greek myth, about an old couple visited by hermese and zeus...and in the night that they stay (the two gods) the old couple dies...as a reward for their kindness, Zeus changes them into two trees, that twine together...this reminded me of that...nicely written Susan!
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Lovely piece, MUST READ
Oh this is absolutely gorgeous! I am just awe-struck. Geez, don't know what to say. You kinda took my breath away. In a very good way. Beautiful, beautiful write...
I did notice one typo, I think? wouldn't be me, if I didn't mention it... "What seeds we sow can only grown with tender hands and care" grown / should be grow?
Just had to read it again... The first stanza just takes my breath away. Lovely write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! Susan, sweet sis, this is sooooooooooooooooo beautiful, from your amazing heart!!!!!!!!!
Love this background, where did you find it?
Love ya,
Karen
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Ohh this is lovely. It reminds me of a song I once heard, "Danny Boy". It's very romantic. I also really like the background and the title. Great job.
Becca
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Beautiful, simply just beautiful. Love shown so simply. Fluid words give it body and even a mind. It all flows into a whole.
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Susan as usual , you write with such love and you speak in beautiful words from the heart
Reenie
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an absolutely beautiful write from you, susan!
your words capture my heart with their power!
very strong, and incredible images come to mind with this!
blessed be
mike -
Awesome!
Awe This is such a beautiful write! I loved reading it The flow was awesome and the rhyming was excellent! Thanks for sharing
James
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This one is beautiful, strong and true love that lasts is the only one. thanks for this write. In a world of so much pain it feels really good to wake up in the morning and read about something so good.
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Lovely, natural and soulful..heartfelt.
Gives so much of self to love.
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THis poem has such a beautiful flow to it
I enjoyed the rhyme scheme
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A lovely poem Blushful. Much enjoyed.
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oh how very very beautiful. i think that you have wrote such a wonderful poem here my friend. I think this is a grand piece of poetry. i thank you so much for shareing it.
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As beautiful as a song whispered on the winds beneathe a full moon's glow.
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love it! I always enjoy when people use internal rhymes...they add such a melodious tone to the poem....and are not that easy to pull off. You did it very well and I applaud you for that.
(I think you may have meant grow instead of grown in the fifth line)
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Hiya Blushful, thank you for commenting onb my poetry! I Always love seeing your comments there..And now, for your poetry!
My dear poet, I must say that your loving heart is just so apparent in this one. It is soooo good to come across the sweeter, lighter pieces here of love grown, and still growing. I love the imagry, of that every deed that the heart makes, becomes a rose upon a tree..Just utterly beautiful ! I am glad to have found you here!
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This is very romantic, sweet. Ah love can be so grand and apparantly you know that! Great write. Kelly
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Beautiful
SD
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