Our emotions dancing like oodles of stars
Universal intentions, hands, hearts, souls
Roses of passion, subtle petals of love.
Dynamic explosions pure in pleasure
Artful words caress me in songs
You are my sweetheart forever.
Wine, roses, candlelight, engaged kisses
Impulsive reasons, waste not the moonlight
Lemon trees blowing in the breeze
Lazy moments embraced, lavishing pleads.
Crashing waves massage the sandy shore
Opus melodies blend with natures harmony
Marvelous days, frantic for many more
Exuberance our time, we uncovered life’s treasure.
Author notes
This is an acrostic, that reads: Our day will come...Its one of my old favorite songs. Just to cheer you up, remember your day will come too...
A contest entry
- Take me away by --Beautiful--.
685 points, ended March 19, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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AN IMMACULATE PIECE..
This is amn immaculate piece of dedication to someone in need of emotional upliftment.I admire the purity and clarity that goes with this message to someone beloved.
Thank you so much for sharing this well wishes of love for a happy cuple to be with each and everyone on this poets forum.
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Truly Wonderful
You outdid yourself with beautiful words and imagery. Great work. A nice read.
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Damn!!
You are way too good!!!! As if there is such a thing!!!! Well, I think you know what I mean anyway!!! Get em' Ennovy!!!!
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Sweet moments to come, would that life could be this beautiful, Just a delight to the sense to read. Well done and good luck
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This was beautiful...every word fit perfectly in the poem and in me...i love the first few lines ...but really i love the all they all define me right now...Thank you so much for entering this was something i really needed to read...i find myself sayign that twice now...maybe i need a book lol...goodluck
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