My dear vampiress
I have made you mine
I have stolen your life
But given immortality
Tonight is our night
Where you become my bride
I will lay you down
on a bed of red roses
To mix with the red
Dripping from your flesh
I will give no mercy
For your your blood is all mine
I can see you are ready
Let's walk this dark night
Into the infinite shadows
One thing that I need
Before we do this
Is a kiss from your sweet lips
With a bite from my fangs,
To delight in the passion
Of your lips and mine
Filled with your warm blood
Inside of my mouth.
Author notes
I'm so glad that i found this contest! I JUST happened to watch (the ORIGINAL) just a couple nights ago! perrr-fect!
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"My dear vampiress
I have made you mine
I have stolen your life
But given immortality
Tonight is our night
Where you become my bride" is my favorite part -
I love this! I'm a huge fan of vampire movies. Even vampire shows. They have such mystery and grace. I absolutely love this poem. It is great!
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cute yet kind of physco ish i luv it well done i also luv the pic
well good luck in the contest
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Very well written vamp poem. Nice picture too. What I liked most about the poem, were these lines "I will lay you down on a bed of red roses" That jumped out at me right away. Very creative. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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This was awesomely romantic at the same time as it is creepy! Much props on this one sis!
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