You can call me emo,
Or a stupid metal head.
Even call me a liar,
About the true things I’ve said.
Call me a dumb blond.
Or a little slut.
But the reality is,
You should keep your mouth shut!
I am something else,
I’m none of the above,
I’m not your pretty playgirl;
Your perfect white dove.
You can call me a sook.
Or an attention seekers.
But if you really want to no me,
You should look a little deeper.
All the parts of me,
That you have grown to know,
Are merely tiny segments,
Of what I wish to show.
Don’t but me in a category,
For the things that I’ve done.
Don’t bother with a label,
For I will never fit just one!
Author notes
just sick of the labels that nobody understands. you cant label somone you dont no all about!!
A contest entry
- For Those Poets Who Have Never Won A Trophy Before by wings of an angel.
525 points, ended February 26, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awesome job most of all in the part were you say "You can call me a sook.
Or an attention seekers.
But if you really want to no me,
You should look a little deeper." -
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Awesome awesome piece chickie! I can certainly see why you won a trophy! Yay! I love you xoxox
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Thanks
i actually liked this one (and thats not like me, iv only got about 5-6 i really like)
luv ya too XoXoX
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wowwzzz..
i go thro this so often.
im a plastic-emo-hard core rebel.
thats according to stereotypes.
labels are odd..
i luv this peice.
i'm not a tin can so don't label me.
well done
xxCazzaxx
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im very glad you liked this poem. and im sorry that you go through it too. labels are stupid.
can u explain 'plastic-emo-hardcore-rebel'? lol soudns pretty interesting
anyways take care
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well...
i wear pink n love my lipgloss - plastic
emo - self explanitory
hardcore - um, the music i listen oo
rebel - cuz i break tons of rules.. -
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lol, fair enough. that reminds me alot of myself too. anyways thanks for the comment, and dont listen ot anybody labels!!
take care
XoXoXoXoXoX
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You go girl, thats the way to tell them when you don't know a person you shouldn't label them without getting to know the person first. Your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem, well done dear poet good luck in my contest
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Thanks alot for your comment, it means alot. i'm glad you liked it
take care
XoXoXoX
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you are so right I deal with the same thing all the time and I can't stand it when people think they know you but if you try and talk to them about the way they are they say that I don't know them but of course they think they know me and that gives them the right to tell me what I am doing wrong. gurrr I hate dealing with it and your poem tells it perfectly!
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Thanks so much for your comment. im sorry you go through the same thing... label suck!!
take care XoXoX
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Wow! I'm bookmarking this one. You put the hatred you have of labels and worded it so good (did that sentence even make any sense?) Anywho, another brilliant write...keep it up!
oh yeah, what's a sook?
*snap*
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Thanks for your comment. and thanks for bookmarking it... and weather that made sence or not, i no wat u mena lol. lol take care and thanks XoXoXoX
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YES
Go u good thing
As long as you are happy with the way those who love you (like me) see you that is all that matters Why should you spend your precious time trying to impress people who aren't worth the effort. Keep spilling your feelings my special AP daughter...... Luv u 
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Thanks heaps AP mum im glad you liked it. and im glad you understand... take care
XoXoXoX
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