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I'm Nothing but Faded.

Nothing will ever
go right in my life
I can't do this
I want to give up

I know that I'm stronger
than this
but I just can't do it
especially by myself

I have no one by my side
no one to take my hand
and help me through this
no one to tell me thats its ok

Its ok to feel sad
NO IT'S NOT
I hate being sad
all the fucking time

My depression is getting worse
my self esteem getting
lower and lower
pretty soon I'll be gone

I'm fading from life
I know I am
I'm finally accepting the fact that
I'll have no one in my life

I don't need love in my life
hate is fine with me
its all I've ever felt
so I'm use to it

I want to give up
but I know I can't
So I'll just be that faded girl
that no one sees

Author notes

Yeah....its how I feel. Suck I know....sorry.

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  • Kurtis and Trista
    February 26, 2007

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    I want to give up
    but I know I can't
    So I'll just be that faded girl
    that no one sees

    Tottaly know this feeling. I know what you mean. I reall ylike this poem. Did a great job. I LOOOOOVE IT!!

  • Heavenly Star
    February 26, 2007
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  • Heavenly Star
    February 20, 2007
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    This is a heartbreaking poem you penned here, never give up on life, I know you feel like this now but things will get better if you fight and have the will to win and not let things in life get you down, you penned a lovely poem here well done dear poet


  • King Nothing
    February 19, 2007

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    Well, I'll say it. IT'S OKAY. I know I'm not near NY but I'm HERE FOR YOU, and obv. so are other people!!!

    I LOVE YOU.

  • She Stole My Voice
    February 19, 2007

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    "Nothing will ever
    go right in my life
    I can't do this
    I want to give up

    I know that I'm stronger
    than this
    but I just can't do it
    especially by myself"

    No. No one can do ANYTHING by themselves.
    "A helping hand should always be welcomed"- Chinese proverb
    I know how it is to feel sad all the bloody time. When I felt like that, I felt like nothing and no one could make me happy at all. But then I don't know what happened, but I felt so much better.


    <33

    I'm always here for you hun

    Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing!

    ~Princess of Shadows~


  • xXRawerxX
    February 19, 2007
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    Hey Lissy,
    This is really good. No joke its like really deep and full of emotion. It really tells how u feel. I love this a lot. lol to good for words so keep up the awesome work and I love u tons Payne
    Love Always,
    ~!*Katty*!~

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