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Splish splash

WARNING & EXPLANATION

This poem was written for a contest but was thrown out because
(I quote)"removed Splish splash from contest Romance is in
the air because sorry not in the spirit of the contest.
All the judges agreed on removing you from the contest"

Here is picture! Sad that. Barty thinks poem v. good.

 

  



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cute longlegged girl
walking by swimming pool
(just come back from toilets
so swimsuit a bit damp
in the gusset area)
suddenly finds
kinky freak with guitar
dressed like 50s rocker
chasing her like nutter
so gives one big shove
into his overdressed gut
silly fart goes straight in pool
splish splosh he is taking a bath
all about a Saturday night

Author notes

Barty says: poem no bloody good unless you check out contest piccy! Yessir!

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2340288

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Comments

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    April 11, 2007
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    Elvis sucks

  • bon bon
    March 4, 2007

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    A lovely tribute to Elvis dear.Splish splosh is delightful I have to go grab my rubber ducky now.You got me all a flutter.

    Maggie


  • -I love my midget-
    February 19, 2007

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    with a title like that I was hoping it was a poem about bukkake.

    speaking of bukkake, I have a contest running which includes the option of bukkake themed poems.

    don't ask me where I got the idea, it just came over me.


    • Bartholomew Mole
      February 20, 2007
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      Sadly your lovely-sounding contest has been deleted it seems. I wonder what came over people to do a thing like that?

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