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Good Touch Bad Touch

Hands so big and rough
A heart so tender yet so tough
Dutiful daughter why bother to fight
She knew he was Daddy, he had to be right
She held her breath to not be heard
She did not utter a single word
Creeping down the hall he came
Whispering, whispering, whispering her name
She thought she knew his love was true
She did not ask, she knew what she was taught to do
Behind closed doors so no one could see
He covered his bases from A to Z
She learned her lesson well
A single soul she would not tell
His secret safe, now locked away
She was just his little waif
Behind the curtain the truth now lies
She'll take it to her grave when she dies
She hides under the covers wearing nothing but a secret
The scent of his maleness lingering on

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  • Wow. Good job.


  • marlena1119
    February 26
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    really really good


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 30, 2007
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    G'Day mate

    "He covered his bases from A to Z
    She learned her lesson well
    A single soul she would not tell
    His secret safe, now locked away"

    So emotional and scary lines.
    Powerfully penned.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Stay safe
    ~AJ


  • xXMascarra-TearsxX
    August 23, 2007

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    wow this was great but it is so horibe that someone could do this to their own child at that i loved it though great write


  • Princessdove
    February 19, 2007

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    Sad poem about molestation. I can relat well, your not alone. I am glad that you are writing about it. Keep up the good work.

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