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I Summon The Wind (Triolet)

I summon the wind
To steer my love back to me
My cares and woes to rescjnr
I summon the wind
To change to content my chagrined
To bask again in ecstasy
I summon the wind
To steer my love back to me.

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    February 26, 2007

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    I got confoozled with the third line...

    My cares and woes to rescjnr

    It's been a looong morning and I have been down with the flu so my addled brain is working in slow mode and the word you wanted there just isn't coming to me right now. I'll have to come back to this and see what I can make of it later.

    Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
    ♥ Touchof1der