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Doctored Up Truth {Cherries}

I’ll doctor up the photos and give’em all a show!
Me bare and served up any way you please!
And doesn’t it excite! Doesn’t it just satisfy!
I can be anyone and anywhere you please!
Will you hold me? Will you hold me?
I can lean against you just like your second skin!
And I’ll please you just any way I can!
A lie? A lie? I dare not tell a lie!
Cut down the tree? Not I, not I!
I just picked all the cherries and ate them, every one.
They are stars, they are red, bloody stars,
They are hearts, plucked straight from the chest,
They are eyes, eyes red and glaring!
Oh! Oh they are just anything you please!
Do you want them? Do you want them back?
I'll pull them out, oh I'll pull them all back out!
It is a gift, a gift from me to you.
You see? You see? Am I a good girl now?
Does it matter that it’s all a lie?
Doesn’t it excite? Doesn’t it just satisfy?

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  • crystaltears16
    February 19, 2007

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    cool, i really like the style you used, and the repition. The descriptions of the cherries are almost frightning, but very good. I like it lots.