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Spell

Invoke! Invoke! Spirits of the Air, come forth at my Calling!
Come upon the Wings of Swiftness!
Come upon Invisable Chariots!
Come through the Trees that bend and sway!
Come through the dark Night and bright Day!
Come with the Snow and come with the Rain!
Come with the Frozen, frost colored Pain!
Come like Laughter!
Come like Screaming!
Come like Ghosts!
Come like Dreaming!
Come forth! Come forth!
Invoke! Invoke!
Spirits of the Air, thee I invoke!

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    February 26, 2007

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    The repetition works well within this piece. I also agree that it has that definite flavor of being of incantation of sorts.

    Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
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  • ScarletO gold member
    February 19, 2007

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    Go, go away evil spirits of the night!!!!!!!!! LOL Sorry I could not resist. This is like a incantation of sorts and really good. Cute one.


  • Radiant Serephim
    February 19, 2007
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    f ucking amazing

    yeah thats right this poem is freakin sweet