Me and my friend are both walking
Through life we both have smiles,
We are both happy.
Then I look around nothings there
The world is gone nothingness surrounds us
and we are all alone,
alone to face the pain,
all alone in this world not knowing how to survive.
Then all of a sudden out of the blue
A trumpet blows loud and strong
The world starts to shake,
And the earth cracks open,
And even all the oceans pouring in,
Till water is no more
Can not put out the eternal fire
And the demons come out and grab my friend.
She cries for me to help and I try,
But just as she is being pulled
So am I but she is being pulled into the ground
And I am being pulled into the sky
I can not grab her I am up to high,
Down she goes into the night.
I cry, I cry, I cry for her,
I cry for her blood shed,
I cry and I can not stop.
I am alone and so is she.
Alone with are heartache
And the heartaches in me
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It makes me think of how naruto and garaa must have felt in there battle and in there life. it also makes me think how sasuke and naruto felt in there battle, and how sauke felt when Itachi murdered there clan.
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Then I look around nothings there the world is gone nothingness surrounds us and we are all alone,
alone to face the pain,
Very deep right here and oh so true -
again sorry about misspells I think you can read it now
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"I'm all alone."
"He's all alone"
"Yes all alone"
"Except for us"
"Each of us is all alone side by side"
Quick bit of Monty Python, but very relevant.
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mistakes
sorry about that now mabey you all can read it
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Nice job with your write, some areas where you need spaces.
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