Oblivion before his eyes, this little girl, to her surprise, fell in love with a Devil dancing words across her heart, whispered art, vampire affection and soft misdirection, she died before him, and offered herself fully, her virginal beauty, and was rejected, turned away, wept in dismay as he laughed in her face, it was a test, sweet and simple, and time built her temple, this beautiful child evolved into what he had showed her, wicked and older, deception her weapon this vixen impressed him and took what he had refused her before, she stole his seed, succubus dreams, and attatched to his soul her mark evermore, the lessons continued, her tears flowed from his words, and eventually Witch was what he called her, Night was her name, Darkness was his, and they tore through lives with their Demonic kiss, blighting and breaking and working wickedness, black souls in a malestrom, Hell's own from day one, oblivion before her eyes, this Warlock, to his surprise, fell in love with a Devil dancing lies across his heart, whispered art, vampire affection and soft misdirection, he died before her, and offered himself fully, his solem sworn duty, and was betrayed, turned away, cursed the day that she lied to his face, revelation within him, understanding came from this sin; he taught her to work Evil, she had used it on him.
Author notes
True story.
A contest entry
- Dark Love by loveaswellashate.
393 points, ended February 20, 2007, 13 entries
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I was just browsing some poems and this one looked rather interesting.
It was vividly written. I enjoyed reading this very much.
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This was a very interestin peice.. i like it alot too.. i love the rhyming and the story of it.. its a great job.. good luck and thanx for joinin my contest...
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Aw. I got hugged... that was unexpected.
Yea... it's a nice story that is ending in a painful divorce. I couldn't find a way to poetically express the legal ramifications of what happened... so I left it out.
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