Drive, North
stopping only in
Burlington (Vermont),
and hopping a plane
even further North.
I will be with
My Love
(we'll make love too).
In the six month Night,
to better appreciate
the explosion of Light
at worlds end
Author notes
not that amazing, i know, but its what i'd do.
A contest entry
- Forty Words - What would you do today? by DancingRed.
300 points, ended February 20, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like the thought of travelling north, and then going even further north. It's a deeper idea than first imagined. Thank you for entering this poetic piece in my contest.
DancingRed.
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this is a nicely written peice about a journey for love.. I really like ... "In the six month Night, to better appreciate, the explosion of Light",, with your love, you could feel the anticipation for romance.. well done!!
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i enjoyed reading this. have nothing to relate to but thought you should have a comment cause this poem is pretty good.
Jonny
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