Im calling,
but you cant hear me,
your not listening to me,
anymore.
Im falling,
closer to the ground,
but you dont save me,
because you dont see me.
Im calling,
your name,
but you dont want me,
so you dont,
want to save me.
Im falling,
closer and closer,
you dont hear me,
so now,
you will never see me.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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dark and sad
A feeling of love's ending, romance gone, falling away
and not being seen as the love you once were ..
deep thoughts , imagery of falling away.
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wow.. I could really feel the despair in this.. I like the way you used, 'I'm falling' and 'I'm calling' at the begining of the stanzas.. a very deeply written poem about loving someone who doesn't love you, quite sad really, well doen!!
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