Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Just Another Star

Your just another star,
in the sky,
that shines down,
in the night.

Just another star,
that burns out too quickly.
Your radiant fire,
dispersing in the air.

Just another star,
is born,
to take your place.

Just Another star,
that leaves the universe,
your pigments,
going into space.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • capricornpoet
    February 19, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    loneliness

    Each line is a sadness and loneliness, a love disappearing.. lovely metaphores.