When the wind blows
And the sun sets
The moon rises
To reveal only tears.
These tears of mine
Hide all my dreams
Reveal my darkest fears
But only those that come true.
These fears, none created
But mastered through love
Give me strength to hide
From the evil around me.
As the wind brushes my cheek
And chills sprint down my spine
The sound whispers into my ear
To hush what my heart screams.
When the wind blows
And the sun sets
The moon rises
To reveal my secrets.
A contest entry
- I Summon The Wind by Touchof1der.
650 points, ended February 26, 2007, 24 entries
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There are some really sad thoughts and emotions flowing down the page here. This poem is packed with a lot of feeling.
Thank you for taking the time and effort to enter my contest. Good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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Great write, I liked he sun sets and moon rises. GOod job.
Kevin
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hey babe,
i really like this one a lot... it reminds me of how here in oregon...
the sun does set, and the wind does blow, and the moon does shine...
but one other thing that doesn't change is my love and care for my best firend...you. i miss u and i love this poem!! -
I like this. It is very discriptive and filled with emotion.
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Very Caputuring
I love the hook of this poem. Using the same parragraph in the first and last stanzas really creates that effect! Wonderful write!
-T4E
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