Blazing with fire inside my soul,
It clashes with my soft sensual spirit.
Yearning to fill alive in mystic ways,
The wind blows fiercely through my hair.
To move slowly through lands time,
Water urges me along the banks of sorrow.
Stepping out onto the ground of my people,
The earth fills me with completeness.
Author notes
OPTION #7:
I like poems about the elements; Water, Fire, Earth, Heart, ... whatever else there is. You may write a poem about one or more or all.
A contest entry
- OPTIONS FOR EVERYONE!!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
425 points, ended March 8, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I ADORE The elements. I am absolutely mad over Japanese and Chinese cultures and the elements. Probably too much actually XD But anyhooo! I love this poem and love it more because of the elements you have based it on. Wonderfully written. I really have missed your work
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It is a very soothing piece! Thank you for writing it!
K
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That was very magical and mystical. I liked your choice of words, the simplicity of your poem, and the fact that it is short! lol
Very nicely written.
Thank you so much for entering this poem in my contest, I enjoyed reading it very much. Good luck and keep on writing,
Nooni
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going back on the contest market are we, lol this is good, you knwo you did a great job on them keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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