does it break your heart when i say i don't love you anymore?
does it crush your hopes when i say we don't work anymore?
does your soul break down when i tell you i don't care about you anymore?
do you even care that we aren't inlove anymore?
does it break your heart when i say i don't love you anymore?
Please tell me what you think
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Short but sweet.. I'm probably the worst at critque because I never sit anyalizing everything and spell/grammar checking... but I shall definitely say this is a great write.. I can tell that it must have been what you were thinking at the moment. I love poems that do that... Great Job! I liked it
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simple, yet gets the point across... capitalization issues, but tis a bad habbit of mine as well. it could have been longer, but still. i look forward to reading more of your poetry
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