deep within a humble, contrite mind
are organic mirrors of thoughts
one’s destined identity
mirrored by another
who’s vulnerable
grant me this task
to trust you
as we
heal
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I love you. Inspired by http://allpoetry.com/poem/2650138
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A lovely poem for a lovely young lady...
Because of you, she and I now share secrets
and drink into the night
...one of your bunnies just ate my Twinkie,
damn it.
Peace, Lane
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Call me and I will bring another twinkie right over, whenever you need it. it's the least I can do. Yes, she is a beauty. Can't seem to reel her in, though. Just keeps taking my bait and running. *sigh* Story of my life...
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the very humbleness of this piece is aweinspiring. Please do not ever stop writing.
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You have a way of saying things. Yes, a fine canvas indeed! I am painting for all I am worth, never leaving a mark. -
awwwwwwwwwws how freakin sweet! To think of your destiny mirrored by another is a sweet thought like true love!
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beautiful , a lovely dedication to a beautiful soul....I love it!!!
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Fantastic!
Wonderful nonet! For the sweetest little poet on AP. Allan this is beautiful. So is it my turn?
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No no nonets! I have seen few and I'm tired of them already. Don't make me read anymore! Please! Hahaha. Write a Myra style poem. That I can take many of, not these. And sweet? Are we talking about the same Amera? The bitch? Are there two Amera's?
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A compassionate poem ...
so typically of this troubadour. Well, Amera, you may bask in the warmth of his adoration.
To trust while healing is a wondrous taks of love. Well done, Allan.
Love
Always Myra
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Well, she had me in a headlock and made me do it. I wouldn't be surprised to see others do that, now that they have seen how easy it is.
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I don't get embarrassed. You need to have pride for that. Ha ha ha. Today is yours. Battle again tomorrow. *smile*
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