I spend my time rewriting the past
(&just how long will the future last?)
Concentrate on this:
This is how it ends,
guilty as sin we both believe we're better off
And you leave me choking on my words.
Cause what once was, is now gone
And I thought I was your only one.
But maybe that's just naivety talking,
Cause I've seen alot of things,
But I didn't see this coming.
I thought I'd like to hear, your secrets
That flow like fucking tears
And I just wanted to bask in your fears -
Now I just want to be at that point,
where we can't tell what is me and what is you
And it doesn't even matter anymore, cause you're
part
of me.
For me - this is passionate desperation
For you - it's a kick. [a kick in the head]
And we can't both reach the spot.
Cause Goddamnit, all I can do is try to help
Save you from myself.
Author notes
Yeah. Not really sure about this one.
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Whoa! You, like... wrote! Oh my god, I thought you were dead, lovely!
I like it. The last couple lines made me smile that one smile... Familiarity. Strange thing it is.
These lines I enjoyed the most I think:
"And I just wanted to bask in your fears -
Now I just want to be at that point,
where we can't tell what is me and what is you"
I can relate to them, and I like the idea of basking in Someone Else's fears...
-Allura -
Its been so long since I have been able to read your writing! Where have you been?? I swear I'm still in love<3
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truth
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it's not as good as a lot of your writing, but as a first poem back after a long break it's pretty lushy. i like the last 5 lines muchly... it's a kick [a kick in the head]... i hope you are ok.
i loove you beccaaaa xxxxxxxx always x
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I like it. I like all your work, but this is really good. I can definetly say that a lot of people are gonna be able to relate to this. I know I can. Great job.
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