Water, like rain
Falls from her hands
Drenching the world in solitude.
Air, like wind
Cascades from her hair
Throwing everything all out of place.
Earth, like soil
Bleeds from her eyes
Masking all sight into darkness.
Fire, like love
Burns in her heart
Creating new dreams forged from laughter.
Author notes
Option 7.
Great contest with great options! Had me worried for a sec I wouldn't be able to do it lol! Thanks for helping me bring my inner elements to life! And thanks to all who read and commented.
Cj
What do you think?
Comments
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This is very beautiful. Thank you for entering this simple and enjoyable piece into my contest. The flow and the word choice are awesome.
I loved the ending the most!
Keep on writing, and good luck
Nooni
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Good job sis! I really like the last stanza.
Fire, like love
Burns in her heart
Creating new dreams forged from laughter.
That really resonates with me for some reason. I love this piece. Great job, as always. Love ya!
*Hugs!*
♥Chelsea
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wow cj i'm so amazed by your poetry, i think you are a wonderful writter, with a beautiful mind this poem is so powerful and strait forward with the descriptions being right on the dot i'm not sure w/e i can say i'm rather speachless at your writting ability
blessed be
lil
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Oooh! Very different than your usual form, sis! I like it a lot. And as always, it's a great and managable length. This has really great imagery, I can see it all! It inspires you to go and do something that involves elements. I liked how it was all tied into a person.
You're such a great poet.
Love,
-Anna
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