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Untitled Poem

Sneering
Jeering
Hearing
Fearing

broken
spoke
token
awoken

Who spoke?
Who wept?
Who broke?
Who kept?

Lying
Crying
sighing
Dying

who sought?
who dreamed?
who fought?
who schemed?

You

Author notes

Oddly, I'm in a fairly good mood today, I've just had this cadence dancing around my head. Have fun wiht it, I certainly don't think it's that great.

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Comments

  • Shadow Weaver
    February 21, 2007

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    WOW

    Nice piece brother of mine... I like the format and then the ending. Well done. Intresting and unique. I like it!


  • AkaBaki
    February 19, 2007

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    yeah buddy

    I liked it alot. i liked "lying crying sighing dying" part. great poem. keep up the good work.
    -AkaBaki