It don't make no any difference to the way
What I feel today
Althogh the sky is grey
I am not ashaymed to be gay.
Althogh the rain is tumbling down
And fallin' down on the groun'
I am realy oh so happy now
With the new true love what I have found.
Mistaykes their have been more than just a few
And I know have made some as well too
But the one mistake I didn't never do
Was to have a real good wank in the bushes with you.
A contest entry
- the best you can do! (for our none acomplished writers) by honey bear.
550 points, ended March 4, 2007, 32 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - !Homosexual Hallelujah! by JULzz- ROLaa.
435 points, ended October 19, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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it may be bad, but ive seen worse...
hehe!!! i dont think its as bad as to not make a diff to me, so heads up!
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diz iz ecxelennt!
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Your sarcasm slays me! Very badly written!
And I mean that in a good way... I think! Great job, and good luck with your entry, although we all know you're a grammar hound!
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Amusing.
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Lol, you piss-taking S.O.B
Having said that, I think this is one of your best poems EVER.
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I agree. It is a great poem. You have taste.
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pmsl.
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I don't suppose this will be the worst entry by a long shot- I trust you are not taking a spot from someone slightly more deserving. I may enter myself......
As for the poem- a modern tragedy...but I guess they are happy.
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You may enter yourself Mr C? Wow, I must say I am impressed and can happily say; go f**k yourself!
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Self-entry is not so very difficult, although it can be very messy and unpleasant. It is how my Uncle Dick died. One dick too many.
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I be's cryin croc tears this be so bootyful!!
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Iss thiss the beast u kan du?
Wel, sins evrywun els is mispelins there wurds, whi shood I difer? I think this little ellegy is both mooving, sucksinked and truly elegaick in it's simplissity. Since I have 2 free clapps left, you can hav them. Off coarse, u mite win, you nivver ken. Weel done!
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Stop prettending you's ilierate mate, we no yous a dab hand at the old gramma lark.
A sensitive write Edna, well done.
Ann
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LOL i was knockin bak sum paine killers as i red this.
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ha ha ha dis iz da bst poem ava like ha ha ha
good luck in the contest with this smile bringer ha ha ha
i dint nitice wun speeling eror nut one!
so if you need a hand ..oh my .. you already had one..
anyway as i was saying
good luck in the contest with this fun write (and i do i hope it was not a thorn bush)
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I wood like 2 thank you 4 my luvly silver cup; it is so gay looking and if I pollish it real wel I can see my pretty face lokin back at me. And the points are nice ones 2. Thank U.
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Beautiful and touching. A real insight into the life of a modern homosexual.
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