i know my Master loves me
i am His submissive slave,
i need His total domination
it's not just punishment i crave,
i'm His collared pet,
His bondage whore,
pain takes me places
i've never been before,
when He puts on my cuffs
and attaches the chains,
i give myself completely
to my Master and His domain,
the leather of his whip,
that is my reward,
spreader bars in place
my body to be explored,
hot wax from the candles,
or the ice from His drink,
He takes me to the edge
and pulls me back from the brink.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Erotic Challenge Season 6 by Master Ktulu.
450 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ooooo, yummmmy! Oh hon we are going to have SOOOO much fun this time again! I am glad that you are going for this as well!
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*Smiles* you speak of so many aspects of the lifestyle that many of U/us know and love... this speaks of the physical.. and the emotional in the fact that you crave the total domination.. and not just punishment.
A very nice write
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Congratulations and welcome to the challenge
yes, I can see what Ktulu and tanzanite are saying about that not being it in a BDSM relationship, but let's face it ... that aspect definitely adds to it doesn't it???
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I really liked this, being a submissive to a wonderful Mistress. However, i have to agree with Gaia that the punctuation is off a bit and that does make it hard for the reader, also, she is correct in saying that there is more to the lifestyle than just whips and chains...and should you have the chance to research or explore that...or maybe you have, then in that case...you already know..lol
Finalist for sure
**Master Ktulu** -
This is a wonderful testimony to the lifestyle. I thought that the punctuation needed work. It interrupts the flow of the piece for me. Also, you have shown the dedication one looks for in one that is submissive, but I feel that there is so much more to this than whips and pain. I would love to see you explore that. I liked it, but I think it needs something more that hits one in the face. I need to feel the power and freedom that I know is there when one submits.
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Another naughty one. Whew, I am getting all hot under the (dog) collar as I strain to get the best focus with my new Voigtlander Field Glasses, perched on the ledge outside my bedroom window.
Here's one you might like: http://www.allpoetry.com/poem/1026592 .
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WOW!! this was excellent...i'm glad i came by your profile...adding you as a fave...
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Great pic with the link. Your write is very well said and I might add that I could feel more emotion of the heart behind the obvious that was stated. Wonderfully expressed. Thanks for entering and the best of luck
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Thank you for your contest submission. LOL ok you are forgiven hehe it CAN be difficult to use this if you are more prone to sensuality than raw sexuality hehe. (that is how I am lmao, I think my sisters in this are trying to get me to write something harder for once hehe if only they knew
). ANYHOO very well written piece, although a few placs could use some polishing, it is minor. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e *
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My thoughts, exactly
If done right, the master is but a partner in the process. I like taking a dominant role, but at the same time attending to her needs as she expresses them with sounds and moves. What a great composition you have created from one side of the equation -- I have learned from your words the better of my part.
poet
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very expressive
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wonderful ...smiles ~cheeky~
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I thought this was pretty damn good.
I can understand about the 'probe' thing ~ 'Tis not a thing of inticing thought... lol
It could have been a little longer, but overall you seem to have spoken volumes with the word choices you made. Yeah, I like it...
I like the flow and the rhyming rhythm kept kinda like a beat within my head....lol
Is utterly cool...
Good luck in the contest too...
Jeffro
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