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Soulmates

God blessed

our hearts


the moment

our eyes first met

 

we were

destined to love


through

space and time

 

no matter

the consquences


no matter

how far

 

even in death
we shall never be apart

 

my love, my life
soulmates

 

we shall be

for all eternity

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  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    Excellent

    Such a creative and lovely write.


  • Faded Existence
    March 7, 2007
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    This is like the sweetest poem ever!! It was beautiful!! Honestly

    -Ambz


  • Endeavor gold member
    February 26, 2007
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  • Endeavor gold member
    February 19, 2007

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    Very Good

    Just lovely

    I hope the one you wrote this for will enjoy it

    All of this is very well written

    Your friend

    Rick


    • mypassion
      February 19, 2007
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      for my dreams

      I have no one in m life...

      but when that day comes, I shall give this to him
      with all the love within my heart,mind and soul...

      Thanks again,

      your friend, Brenda

  • samcuy
    February 19, 2007
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    i love it, it sounds wonderful.


  • TeenFailure
    February 19, 2007

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    This was really good i loved the simplisity of it. It made my heart flutter and wish i would find my soul mate. Keep up the exellent job

    • mypassion
      February 19, 2007
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      thank you

      for reading and critiquing my poem

      one day soon, your soulmate will stand before
      and love you for all eternity...

      never give up hope..
      all in due time..(smile)

      God bless, Brenda

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