She hurt me, I cried and cut myself, I died
Bullshit
I believe you called it
Go ahead,
Point at me, fucking laugh,
DQ me,
and nail me to your
Wall of Shame
I Dare You.
Just make sure that when you do
Im up there, at the top
# 1
And nailed tight
So when I see you, through that haze of red
I have a reason
To rip my self free, leaving it all behind
Just to fall
To your level, far below me
Crushing you
Clutching your throat, and screaming to your face
As you lay there, sprawled on the ground
Giving you the hurt, the hate
And the emotion you asked for.
I wont give you anything else, simply because
Its not worth it
Not to me
Not anymore
Youve given me a lot of rocks, and I'm not
Done
Throwing them back at you yet.
A contest entry
- Titles are a bit overrated (read as, I suck at thinking up titles) by Ilma.
1050 points, ended July 3, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh my gosh at the anger!!! I must say thank you for entering this one because this one made me just...ahhh!! It was great!!! I love the anger and the way you chose to write about it!!
"Youve given me a lot of rocks, and I'm not
Done
Throwing them back at you yet."
I especially loved these lines! It literally made me laugh aloud, because it's so sarcastic, but so true...and not only that, it sounds like something I'd say
Very nice!
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You've given me a lot of rocks, and I'm not
Done
Throwing them back at you yet.
this is my FAVORITE part of the poem though the whole piece is quite lovely to read the feelings you show are quite intense and i enjoyed this read
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Very powerful hun. It's hard being hurt like this... its picking yourself back up again that makes you strong
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this was a great poem and i can really relate..its really hard to be betrayed by someone and it hurts alot..this was a very powerful poem keep writting your very talented
~Chrissy~ -
Seeking revenge is taste fair! But can boomerang too. This piece is angered and strong calling out one whom has transgressed. Go get um tigerrrr!~~Suseann
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