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Starrchild777 (acrostic)

Starrchild is like a fantasy come to life
The words she writes could get me into strife
Arousing, inspiring, a sight to be seen
Romanticizing, in a life that’s been
Rather exotic and certainly erotic
Captivates with words, upon her pages
Helping discover her real life stages
Inviting all who want to read
Laughingly she plants her seed
Delightfully refreshing no holes barred

Zylstra zips through life looking forward
Yet doesn’t let things keep her down
Love for her friends, her heart never leaves
Stays to fight for what she believes
Teasingly pleasures those she cares for
Rejects the others and shows them the door
Astoundingly insightful though I’m sure you’ve found

Author notes

everyone should have a chance to check out her writing... it is amazing and covers every taste.
http://allpoetry.com/Starrchild777

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  • Of Blood and Tears
    February 24, 2007

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    Wow. It is so beautiful. I think that I will have to check her out. ^_^ Good job!?!
    Unfaithfully Your's
    Of Blood and Tears


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 20, 2007

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    thsi is great, i think you really told us alot about this person, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • SensualWhispers
    February 19, 2007

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    hahaha excellent..

    ... I am very proud of this poem. Writing about others is always such a wonderful thing to do and the fact that you wrote it about such a lovely lady makes it all the bette.r Good luck in the contest. Kassie.


  • Kari gold member
    February 19, 2007

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    Aw wow what a sweet and kind acrostic that you've done here. The best of luck to you in the contest.

    Kari


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    February 19, 2007
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    What beautiful things to say about somebody, was a pleasure to read


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    February 19, 2007

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    What a wonderful tribute to an excellent writer you've done a great job honoring her very well penned Bravo


  • Starrchild777 gold member
    February 19, 2007

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    Homage received

    My sweet darling! You do me much honour by not only penning such a tantalizingly mysopic poem, you put it in a contest that pays homage to others. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{luv}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
    ***tears of endearment spread across my cheeks***
    though the 1st stanza brings smiles to my ears its the 2nd that begins the tears in sheer delight. ty my luv.

    ~*Starr*~ XXXXXXX


  • Tattboyspet
    February 19, 2007

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    Seems to me as though u enjoy this person's writing - good write here and it does intrigue me to check this poetess out

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