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Reviving

For a while I was gone,
For a while I was done.
The love of my life is dead,
Picture of us stuck in my head.
Sometimes I wish i was left ot be,
But then you came and rescued me.
You saved me from myself over and over,
Showing me how its like to be sober.
For a while I was gone,
For a while I was done.
Sometimes I wish I was left to be,
But then you came and rescued me.

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  • Xcall me supermanX
    May 3, 2007
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    I WILL BE HERE FOR YOU


  • Princessdove
    February 19, 2007

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    Good job with your poem. Your so lucky to have the fairy tale ending. What a romantic story. Keep up the good writes.


  • Her hand in yours
    February 19, 2007

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    Just so heartfelt, the pain and tears, always dying, I'm glad that someoone's there to rescue you....
    How many people can relate to this...

    I hope you're feeling okay there,
    antonio